You have introduced too many characters in chapter 1. Was this necessary?

This was an observation from a friend. Thank you!

You maybe on to something. The point about introducing too many characters in the first chapter is an interesting one and has got me thinking more deeply about how readers experience the story’s opening.

Introducing multiple characters early on can sometimes help set the stage and establish the world, but it can also risk overwhelming the reader if the connections between them aren’t clear or compelling. I’ve been reflecting on the balance between creating intrigue and clarity. As authors, we have to decide what’s essential for the reader to know right away versus what can unfold naturally over time and maybe the balance isn’t quite right.

I’m going to give this more thought and explore whether simplifying the introductions might strengthen the overall narrative. Thanks again for your insight—it’s invaluable!