This ‘was’ my 742nd idea of 2025 that i got excited about and then died a slow death. I’m not sure writing is quite for me, but for full transparency am keeping this as a post. For now anyway! Enjoy.
Chapter 1 [Chapter 1, Draft 2]
Habits were more dangerous than secrets. Secrets could be buried; habits exposed them. That’s why someone had spent three mornings last week, and three mornings this week, tracing the precise movements of the man leaving Norfolk Crescent.
At 6:52am on Monday, 6:56 on Tuesday, and 6:50 on Wednesday, the front door clicked shut, and the man emerged, bag slung over his shoulder, the same every day. He turned right onto Great Stanhope Street and passed the bakery at James Street West, avoiding the Riverside footpath entirely. Not once did he glance over his shoulder.
That Thursday, the observer had stationed themselves further down James Street West and noted the man’s passing at 7:03am his brisk pace uninterrupted by the chatter of passing students or the honk of a distant car. By 7:12am they had both reached St James Parade, and a precise note was scratched into a small pad.
This morning, the observer lingered outside the college which, if his calculations were correct, was approximately fourteen minutes into the man’s journey. The air was thick with the sharp scent of burnt coffee, but his focus didn’t waver. At 7:11am the man appeared, moving predictably toward the station, stepping inside at exactly 7:15.
Seventeen minutes. Always seventeen minutes. The rhythm was clockwork, utterly dependable. Dependable was good. Dependable got paid. The observer unchained his bike and rode off.
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